Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Castaway

     If the stars collide and the moon is right
I'll set this bottle out tonight
It'll float right out into the sea
Under the waves, away from me
And maybe you'll find it from far away
And look inside at what this has to say
And maybe you'll decide to write a reply
Perhaps not before ten years have gone and gone by
But maybe it'll wash up back on this beach
And rest in the sand, close within reach
And a kid will find it tomorrow
In the same place it started before
My shiny, green glass bottle
Resting upon the soft shore
Or it could be the note will toss and will turn
And what it says, no one will ever learn
Maybe it's doomed to be a castaway
Never in one place it will stay
Always on the go
Never to be found
Never to feel the solid ground
Or maybe it'll fall into your hands
You'll find upon the warm golden sands
You'll read this long ramble I've chosen to write,
I'll most likely never know
After I send it tonight

2 comments:

  1. Castaway is a beautiful poem, Gillian! The rhymes are smooth and well thought out. I like how your poem tells a story.

    Annalyse

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  2. I love the rhythm of the poem, it almost sounds like the waves of the sea rolling, and crashing. I love the description. Beautiful poem!

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