The street was dark
Dark enough to hide under
Dark enough to wear like a cloak
Dark enough to wear like a cloak
I didn't mean to be alone
I was supposed to meet a friend
My friend was late
Too late
A car pulled up
Headlights streamed into the darkness
Like two eyes penetrating the mask of the night
I squinted into the lights
Trying to catch a glimpse of the driver
At instinct,
I thought it must be my good friend coming to pick me up
But no
A figure opened the car door
I turned away
I started in the opposite direction
I could hear the swishing of heavy pants in the pitch black
I began to run
Rough, dry hands caught my arms and pinned them behind me
I started to scream
One cracked hand covered my mouth, muffling my words
The night air was a blur
The ground spiraled towards me and I hit it hard
I began to fight with everything I had
I was on the ground
My attacker above me
I slung my fists
Headlights poured through the night
My friend rushed from the car door
Phone in hand
Police on speaker
My attacker took off into the night
Driving away from the police being called
Two headlights
Disappearing
Through
The
Night
~ New point of view ~
He needed money desperately
He couldn't hold a job
He couldn't make a living
Ransom, he decided
He was desperate
He spied a woman in the darkness
She walked all alone
He pushed down any guilty thoughts
He needed money
He wondered how much he'd get
How much her friends and family would pay
To get her back
Probably a pretty ransom
He saw the woman turn and run away
He had to act now
I love the description- and how you wrote it from both the woman's and the kidnapper's perspective.
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